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Titans Sapphire by darkthewise Titans Sapphire by darkthewise
Hello everyone ^_^

Here is a What if That I had decided to color.
What if Wonder Girl and Starfire would become Star Sapphire during the Blackest Night.

I would think after the change over to star sapphire they should get new heroines names such as Wonder Girl would be called Sapphire Wonder. Starfire would be called Sapphire Hime. XD

Of course both of them are a bit upset since most of there friends has been turn into black Lanterns during the Blackest night story arc.

Please let me know what you think of the drawing. all comments are welcomed ^_^ or feel free to just drop by and just say hi ^_^

Wonder Girl and StarFire and all other elements are trademarks of © DC Comics.
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:iconianstruckhoff:
I'm writing this Critique in response to your request on #ComicFemales.

Overall, this work is very strong. I really like what you have done here.

MY CONCERNS:

I'll start with the things that I feel could be improved.

- Composition: The overall layout of the image doesn't seem ideal to me. For instance, the crop is close to WG's head, and right through SFs hair-- If their eyes were around 1/4 to 1/3 down the page then the focus on their expressions would have more impact. (Right now, they layout leads to their chests-- which I could understand, but everyone's eyes will go there next anyhow.)

- Inking (Linework): Part of me really likes the ultra-fine linework you've used here. It's very sharp and crisp, and distinctive. However, I think more varied line weights would give the image more depth and impact.

- Coloring (Shading): Really the only problem I have with the coloring is that the light source isn't clear. Where do you feel the light is coming from in this image? This leads to some confusion about the depth and shapes.

- Background: The moon/sky in the background work well as a simple backdrop. However, the debris and smoke at the bottom doesn't seem to be of the same quality as the rest of the image.


WHAT WORKS:

All that said, for the most part I think this work is powerful and well-executed. Here are some of the biggest strenghts.

Coloring (Palette): You've got some excellent color choices going on here. Given the combination of all of Starfire's colors, Wonder Girl's hair color, and the Star Sapphire colors-- you should have ended up with something that clashed atrociously. You didn't, and I commend you!

Coloring (Style): I really like the soft but somewhat flat-feeling style you've used for the colors. There's depth, and a soft sensuality, but it has a strong pop-art/designy feeling that works for the image.

Emotion/Expressions: Their expressions are great, and very expressive. I wouldn't have thought that Wonder Girl would scowl at being linked to the spirit of love, but the expression is still powerful and well-executed. Even the somewhat blank expression that Starfire has is well-executed and mysterious.

Character/Likeness: One thing you have definitely nailed is something that people usually have a hard time with in comics art-- You can easily distinguish the characters. I don't mean colors, costumes, and powers-- all of which are modified here. I mean that you can tell which characters we are seeing based on their faces, attitudes, and physiques. They definitely aren't generic.


Again, overall this is great! I look forward to seeing more.
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:iconminoana:
minoana Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist
I was just wondering about this! You drew them gorgeously!
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:icondarkthewise:
darkthewise Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014
Thank you very much. Nice to see that you like how they came out.
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:icongonzo22:
gonzo22 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013
very nice work
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:icondarkthewise:
darkthewise Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014
Thank you very much :)
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:iconbat973:
bat973 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013
An excellent job
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:icondarkthewise:
darkthewise Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014
Thank you :)
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:iconbat973:
bat973 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014
Your welcome :)
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:iconstudmuffintommee:
studmuffintommee Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012
Yeah! Cool!
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:icondarkthewise:
darkthewise Featured By Owner May 17, 2012
Thanks ^_^
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:iconartidiotguy222:
ArtIdiotGuy222 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011
Hmm everything seems right but you forgot one thing
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:icondarkthewise:
darkthewise Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2011
What did I forget?
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:iconartidiotguy222:
ArtIdiotGuy222 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2011
The Tiara

It's stander Star Sapphire issue
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:icondarkthewise:
darkthewise Featured By Owner May 18, 2012
No it is not. I have read comic issue where you can see some of them not wear any.
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:iconartidiotguy222:
ArtIdiotGuy222 Featured By Owner May 18, 2012
Really?
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:icondarkthewise:
darkthewise Featured By Owner May 18, 2012
Yes.
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:iconartidiotguy222:
ArtIdiotGuy222 Featured By Owner May 18, 2012
Huh
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:iconnicoriley:
NicoRiley Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice love it
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:icondarkthewise:
darkthewise Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2011
^_^ Thank you ^_^
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:iconmarick129:
Marick129 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2011
nice work
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:icondarkthewise:
darkthewise Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
thanks ^_^
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:iconred-jirachi-2:
Red-Jirachi-2 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011
Star Sapphire Starfire would be...quite fitting
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:icondarkthewise:
darkthewise Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2011
I thought the same thing ^_^
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:iconmightymorphinpower4:
MightyMorphinPower4 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2011
Exllcent work here
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:icondarkthewise:
darkthewise Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2011
Thank you ^_^

Feel free to take a look at the Other Sapphires ^_^
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:iconjose-ramiro:
Jose-Ramiro Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Heh, watch out, Dick and Conner.
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:icondarkthewise:
darkthewise Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2011
Yes run while you can if you wish XD
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:iconmannycartoon:
mannycartoon Featured By Owner May 31, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Great looking concept.
They look great.
The expression on Wonder girl is way stronger than Kori's though.

My only real beef is that the lack of shadows. It looks flat because the coloring lacks dimension.

Keep it rolling.
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:icondarkthewise:
darkthewise Featured By Owner May 31, 2011
Thank you ^_^

I will work on it in the future.

Got it will do.
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:icondstorres:
dstorres Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2011
Great illustration of 2 of my favorite DC Characters. You should make a print of this, it is that well done.
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:icondarkthewise:
darkthewise Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2011
Thank you nice to see you like how it came out. I never thought about making prints of my drawing.
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:icondstorres:
dstorres Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2011
You should consider it. I imagine you'd get quite a few print order request for this one!
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:icondarkthewise:
darkthewise Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2011
yes i will. I will see if i can turn it on then and see what happens.
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:icondstorres:
dstorres Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2011
Cool,looking forward to it.
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:icondarklordfang404:
darklordfang404 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2010
Awesome pic I just wish there were a way to get it without the deviant stamp
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:icondarkthewise:
darkthewise Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2010
I never thought about offer the drawing with out the stamp before
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:iconsyreene:
Syreene Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
Love the angry expression on Wonder Girl's face! :)
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:icondarkthewise:
darkthewise Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2010
^_^ yup you can still have love and be angry about someone trying to take your love away at the same time ^_^
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3LIX1ROFIMAGINATION Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2010  Student Digital Artist
hohohott!!!..definitely well done!
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:icondarkthewise:
darkthewise Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2010
^_^ Thank you ^_^

Nice to see you like it.
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:icontanoatano:
tanoatano Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010
I'd tell you what they should be full of but those jokes write themselves so I will just say that it is an extremely appealing prospect.
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:icondarkthewise:
darkthewise Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2010
Nice to see you like the concept ^_^
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willotaku979 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2010
Hot and Sexy!!! Awesome job. =3
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:icondarkthewise:
darkthewise Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2010
Thank you ^_^
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:iconwillotaku979:
willotaku979 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2010
Your Welcome ^_^
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:iconhelltutor:
HellTutor Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2010
I think it's funny how little Starfire changes in appearance
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:icondarkthewise:
darkthewise Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2010
Yes that is true she does a lot XD
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:iconnewkryptonian:
NewKryptonian Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2010
Totally AWESOME!!!!!
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:icondarkthewise:
darkthewise Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2010
^_^ Thank you ^_^
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:iconpenfolio:
Penfolio Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2010
nice looks good
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:icondarkthewise:
darkthewise Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2010
Thank you ^_^
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